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| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-26-12, 06:03 pm in Helping Paw
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Overachiever
Posts: 1/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
I have a lot of experience when it comes to writing and I'm getting my feet wet with erotic fantasy games such as Pornarinum and Cursed since AM has recently started taking in submissions. I'd be delighted to join the team if you'll have me.
Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-26-12, 06:17 pm in Helping Paw
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Overachiever
Posts: 2/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Bitchin, are you looking for anything in particular in regards to prose? Currently I'm working on slime Male/Female/Herm rape loss/victory text though I can work on anything else you have in mind.
Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 12:25 am in The Bodshivita's writing thread. (revision 6)
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Overachiever
Posts: 3/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
I've created this thread in order to display the current projects I'm working on for the game, and to gather constructive criticism and assistance where needed. If you dig my writing style and have any ideas hit me up I'm quite receptive to the creative input of others and there is no such thing as a bad idea, and I do plan to contribute a lot to the game. First Project: Comprehensive Slime content https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RG-2C2e929T4tlBxcD7veS4TFONOqnPBB849OM3PuvM/edit Second Project: Kawa's original character Chelsie https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-hy5fnEioBGC1MGCiIQiRsr790aWhdIljJjIVkCpHGk/edit Third Project: Dryads (Cumming soon to a Noxico near you!) Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 02:00 am in The Bodshivita's writing thread. (revision 1)
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Overachiever
Posts: 4/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
First allow me to express my thanks, because comment(s) such as yours were exactly what I was looking for when I started this thread. Now I've only really been working on this project for about two hours or so it's not as polished as I'd usually like, but that is no excuse for poor formatting. In the future if you or anyone else sees me slip up, cause I'm not on top of my game please don't be afraid to make corrections with extreme prejudice! I'd consider it a personal favor if you did so, seriously the worst you can do is make the project better. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 11:02 am in The Bodshivita's writing thread. (revision 2)
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Overachiever
Posts: 5/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Yeah I saw your post over on the suggestion box, and I only began to assist with this game today as well. I actually aspire to be a freelance writer myself! I used to stick to writing fluff and mechanics for table top role-playing games, and only started to do erotic fantasy when all the sexy text games started popping up, now I've started writing for games that have sparse content like this one, so from one writer to another I'd simply be delighted to have you proofread my work, chime in anytime. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 02:56 pm in Chelsie Character Development (revision 8)
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Overachiever
Posts: 6/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
The following questions are being asked by Ai (Name not final) the unique slime girl I'm writing. ".....so ummmm, I...I'd like to know...I..if you're into boys or...um *looks away bashfully* girls or maybe something in between?" "Ummm....Chelsie I'm new to all these crazy fetishes, what's your favorite?! I bet Ai will like it too!" "I....I....i'd like to know if you like large breast?" *Ai stares at her own jiggly I-cup breast with a hint of insecurity* "Would you ummmm, mate with someone like me...uh not me! But errrr someone like me..." *Blushes fiercely* "What do you eat....uh....specifically? I know that you do a lot of hunting from my uh observations..but I can never figure out what you hunt maybe we can eat the same things if you get tired of hunting! I really like semen! It's so thick and salty and has an amazing texture! But breast milk is my personal favorite! The sweet taste of creamy milk flowing down your throat is divine. I...if you like maybe we can have dinner together sometime...if you wouldn't mind...why are you looking at me like that?" "Have you ever had any real fff..frrrr....ffren..friends? If so what were they like and how did you treat them?" *Takes notes, Ai has never had any friends* "So...I hear you like reading.....would you like to proofread this novel I wrote...I don't think it's very good..." *Being the klutz that she is Ai hands Chelsie her diary instead.* "Have you ever spent a significant amount of time with someone else? If you have then how long have you been alone and do you enjoy your solitary life style? Could Ai keep you company?" "Have you ever been......you know in l...llloo...uh love before? If so could you describe the experience, and would you care to share the reason why you are not with this person? You don't have to tell me if you don't want to." Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 04:41 pm in The Bodshivita's writing thread.
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Overachiever
Posts: 9/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Cool beans, at the pace I'm going I predict that I'll be done sometime this weekend if not on Friday. If anyone has any ideas for my next project don't be afraid to speak up. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 05:36 pm in The Bodshivita's writing thread. (revision 1)
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Overachiever
Posts: 12/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
I can definitely get behind that, Nya~! I've done catgirls in the past but kitsune will be new ground for me, wait a sec.....aren't those two already in the game?! That's supah convenient, I can't wait to expand on this! Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 05:41 pm in Character racial traits and archetypes (revision 4)
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Overachiever
Posts: 11/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
So something that I seriously think this game lacks are racial traits and instinctive mannerisms that set the races apart from one another. So rather than add new races why not fully flesh out the current ones with racial histories that can be accessed in some sort of a in-game codex, before we start adding Orcs, Pixies, and whatchamahosits to the list. Examples! More information on that one dude, who opened that one portal, for that one succubus. That had to be one important (fine ass) piece of tail for him to put the world at risk, is she still around and can I bang her? Full histories for the beast people of Nox. Making the Tail's of Kitusne erogenous zones. Adding the feline verbal tic to catgirls/bois, nya! Making slimes more receptive to touch, harvesting them for aphrodisiacs, making them more attracted to characters who produce a lot o "food" Increasing the carnality of cubi (I know flight is already a planed feature for them) Giving humans more starting skills at the start. Why are cubi playable characters? Are they spies for the demonic legions that want to kill, fuck and shit the souls of the people of Nox, are they renegades or just stranded? Stuff like that. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 05:56 pm in The Bodshivita's writing thread. (revision 1)
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Overachiever
Posts: 13/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Agreed, you ever play pornarinum? One of the few TF that are present in that game (mainly because it's still quite early in development) is for fox morphs, and having specific body parts in that game gives your skill/stat bonuses and special abilities. Example: Having fox ears increases your int bonus by four and grants you a combat ability that boost your hit/dodge rates. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 06:03 pm in Character racial traits and archetypes (revision 3)
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Overachiever
Posts: 14/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Kawa you are a badass, and you should feel like a badass. I'll put extended histories and stuff on my TODO list. Also I wasn't complaining about Foocubi being playable my favorite character on my games is Lilith, I simply used that as an example. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 06:12 pm in Mistakes with Treasure chest?
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Overachiever
Posts: 15/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
So I started a new game recently to play around with a little pony, when I enter far enough into my first dungeon to encounter a Treasure Chest it turns out that I can't interact with it because it's symbol is over a cave wall tile, so leave and go to another thinking it's an isolated incident, four dungeons later, every chest I found actually turned out to be a cave wall. Also of note there are several times when I enter a set of stairs or a door and have it not appear on the next floor as it gets replaced by "stuff", it leads to a lot of back tracking to find out where your exits have hidden themselves. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 06:25 pm in Mistakes with Treasure chest? (revision 2)
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Overachiever
Posts: 16/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
I know in other games, I've found the short sword and the legendary piece of shit, delicious bacon, sweet rolls and le croissants.
Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-27-12, 07:19 pm in The Bodshivita's writing thread.
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Overachiever
Posts: 17/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Oi Iubdou if you're getting ready to start writing scenes for the game, I'd like to know how you'd feel about collaborating on the catgirl/kitsune content. If you'd like I could start a new google doc, and we could go crazy with the brainstorming. Potential things we can do. Generic sex scenes for both types of female Npcs. Codex entries for their races. Two or more unique Npcs. Whatever the fuck else comes to mind. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-28-12, 03:00 am in The Bodshivita's writing thread.
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Overachiever
Posts: 18/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Heh, I'm glad I have my classes in the mornings, but Awesome! As I've stated before I have little experience with kitsune and am more comfortable with nekomimi, so between the two of us we already have ideas about how to handle the two largest areas of the project independently which is phenomenal in of itself. I'm eagerly awaiting to see what you have in mind, till then I'll be working on the slimes since I'm fee tomorrow. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-28-12, 03:31 am in Character racial traits and archetypes
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Overachiever
Posts: 19/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Tales of the naughty little stable hand: The adventures of risque the slutty pony and her misadventures across the land of noxico! The wood worker: The tales of an foxy forester who braves the wilderness, searching for the perfect tree to plant in her garden. The devil's advocate: The cautionary tale, of a human missionary's journey through the demon realm. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-28-12, 07:23 am in Character racial traits and archetypes
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Overachiever
Posts: 20/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
I'm quite surprised you took those ideas seriously! I really do dig your idea though, is there a hard cap on the number of volumes for each book? Plus this will give me something to fall back on when I need a break from any other project. Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-28-12, 05:24 pm in Character racial traits and archetypes (revision 1)
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Overachiever
Posts: 21/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
Heh, sorry I was in a hurry to post, I did refer to the in-game world correctly in my OP and in several other posts as well though, minor nit pick aside.
Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-28-12, 05:33 pm in Chelsie Character Development (revision 1)
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Overachiever
Posts: 22/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
*Pokes a hole in the fourth wall and takes a peek at the imminent S&M about to occur in the wilderness thread.* Chuckling to herself she watches Cheslie drag the unfortunate whore back to her lair. Ai's smile broadens as the huntress ties her wrist behind a well worn chair, before watching the succubus with a predatory gleam in her eyes "Not, sure huh?" *Pulls out a note book and awaits the biting and scratching.* Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
| Bodshivita |
Posted on 09-28-12, 09:41 pm in The Bodshivita's writing thread.
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Overachiever
Posts: 23/65 Since: 09-26-12 Last post: 4199 days Last view: 4190 days |
I'm gonna start on the slime scenes again at 6:30pm sharp, and try to burn through it for the rest of the day.
Poor bastard: "How much?" Lilith: "Twenty metric fuck tons of gold and I'm all yours, hawtstuff~" Poor bastard: "Uh miss, a fuckton isn't an actual unit of measurement." Lilith: "Bullshit, a metric fuckton is 1000 metric assloads. Which, if you actually fucking went to school, you'd know was equal to 32.5 Helluvalots." |
